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영작을 해봤는데 혹시 문법적 오류가 있나요??

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2021-05-13 21:48
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언어는 사용해야 실력이 는다는게 지론인지라 끊임없이 여러 주제로 영작을 하려고 노력하는데요, 이번엔 태평양 전쟁에 관하여 한번 영작을 해보았어요. 아직 부족한 점도 많고 모자란 실력이지만 살펴보시고 혹 오류가 있으면 지적 부탁드립니다ㅜㅜ


The Pacific War. A war between Japan and the US that was so violent. It started because of Japanese empire's attack on pearl harbor, the naval base of America, on December 9th 1941. The attack was so successful that American army couldn't stop Japanese army for a while that was keeping winning in many battles. Japan occupied entire Southeastern Asia defeating numerous enemies. But in Midway, American navy destroyed a lot of battleships of Japan in the battle. It was a big turning point of the war. American army began to defeat Japanese army on the land and the ocean. Some years later from Midway battle, Japanese army didn't have sufficient power to defend mainland and civilians who live there from air raids of enemy. American aircrafts destroyed even Tokyo, the capital of Japan where the emperor lives. The half of Tokyo was burned with numerous victims. Air raids was done not only on Tokyo, but many great cities in Japan. Japanese civilians put themselves in countries to survive from air raids. Even though a great number of Japanese soldiers and civilians were sacrificed and there was no hope can win this war, Japanese government didn't surrender. Finally August 6th 1945, the first nuclear bomb attack was done on Hiroshima. And a few days later, Nagasaki be a victim of the second nuclear bomb attack. Both attacks mercilessly murdered numerous people. However, it was not a final crisis of Japan. Soviet army joined the war and charged at surprising speed. Japanese army in Manchuria could never protect themselves from violent attack of Soviet army. The string of cases was deadly to Japan. Japanese government finally concluded that Japan could not continue the war and if Japan do, there will be only destruction and despair. August 15th 1945, emperor Showa announced through radio to his people that Japan surrendered. Even though some young officers of army staged a coup not to let Japan surrender, the Pacific War has finished on that day. Needless to say, the war was absolutely wretched to everyone who joined the war. What do we can learn from this historical lesson? It is that always we must keep pursuing peace. Not for others, just for us.

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  • 2021-06-09 14:50

    Japanese army for a while that was keeping winning in many battles.
    등 몇 군데 제외하면 아주 잘 쓰셨어요 ^^ 다 첨삭해드리진 못하는 점 양해 부탁드립니다 ㅠㅠ


    • 2021-06-20 19:58

      아이고 박강사님이 직접 와주시다니....정말 감사합니다!!


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